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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Sta.sh
So as you can see, your vision here was astounding, and your artistic technique flawness in that it presents exactly what it should - a dreamlike atmosphere. So full marks for both Vision and Technique here. Now for Originality I'm only taking off one star because this is a subject that has been done before by many classical artists over the years. However, you tackled the idea of a little girl's dream in a very unique way by adding a darkness to it (as I noted before, which to me symbolizes the onset of the girl's maturity). This is not Alice in Wonderland here, in fact I'm more reminded of Pan's Labyrinth... so though some might not find this to be all that original of a concept, I see just how truly original your presentation of this concept was and so I have to give a high grade for that. To do otherwise would be a great disservice!
The only thing that detracted somewhat from the impact this scene has on the viewer, to me, was how large the artist's signature was and how worked into the scene it seemed to be. Had it been smaller and more in the lower right-hand corner I think it would have been less distracting. Before I realized that was the artist's name, I almost thought it was supposed to be the title of the painting itself. So yeah, that was the only thing I found to be a bit off. Otherwise, the whole image was ideal, dreamy, and simply enchanting!
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